I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello I have been doing some workspace. I made a screencastify about a document. The document was called a robot story. Here is a screencasify of a robot story. Hope you enjoy.
Hey Angel, This is a great story. I love the way you read it with expression and used the punctuation too! Honey sounds like a pretty cool robot, I wish I had a robot with colourful eyes! I wonder if your story would be better in the paragraph about the on and off button if you used the word power button sometimes instead of on and off button? Do you think that owning a robot would be a good or bad thing? Could you get it to do your chores? I think that'd be pretty cool. Your next task is to post your favourite things from the workspace onto your blog! Make sure you include links to what you had to do and why you did it. - Miss Morgan
It would be pretty cool for a robot to do some chores for me that would be awesome that would be my favourite robot then. But I do like doing my chores myself but yeah it would be cool.I could maybe get it to do my chores maybe though. About the on and off button that would be better maybe I think. Have an amazing day today and everyday! -Angel
Hey Angel,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great story. I love the way you read it with expression and used the punctuation too! Honey sounds like a pretty cool robot, I wish I had a robot with colourful eyes! I wonder if your story would be better in the paragraph about the on and off button if you used the word power button sometimes instead of on and off button? Do you think that owning a robot would be a good or bad thing? Could you get it to do your chores? I think that'd be pretty cool.
Your next task is to post your favourite things from the workspace onto your blog! Make sure you include links to what you had to do and why you did it.
- Miss Morgan
It would be pretty cool for a robot to do some chores for me that would be awesome that would be my favourite robot then. But I do like doing my chores myself but yeah it would be cool.I could maybe get it to do my chores maybe though. About the on and off button that would be better maybe I think. Have an amazing day today and everyday!
Delete-Angel
I think owning a robot would be good.
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