Returning to School

Good Afternoon readers I am going to be showing you my first draft, it is about my writing Returning to School after the lock down. I have gotten instructions from my teacher we had to write what we were feeling coming back to school. I am proud that I have done some writing I was writing about  what I was doing, feeling, and who the person was but mainly how I was feeling. I used Exited a lot in my writing because I was very exited. What could I do to improve my writing more?