Saturday, May 2, 2020
A Cloudy Lesson
Hello Bloggers welcome back to my blog. Today I am going to be showing you guys some writing it is called A Cloudy Lesson I had to do it for school. It was all about a grandfather and his grandson. I had to watch a silent video and work out what they were saying and doing. I am happy with what I have done. Here is my writing.
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Gosh you have been busy Angel! Some fantastic creative writing here. I like how you explained their feelings not just what was happening. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Keri for commenting on my blog. How are you today? I am hoping to seeing you soon. Have a lovely day. -Angel
DeleteThanks for sharing your writing with us Angel. I thought it was really cleaver the way you have set your writing out. This has made it really clear who is speaking and when and the writing in italics gives us a bit more information. It was great to see you have used speech marks too when someone is speaking and you have started a new line with a different speaker. One thing you could work on next is making sure that your punctuation is inside your speech marks. For example "Can you blow so you can do a stat?!!!" the ?!!! go before the speech marks because it is part of what the person is saying. Keep up the great creative writing Angel!
ReplyDeleteHello Mrs Mclachlan thank's for commenting on my blog. Next time I will try do what you said about the speech marks that is a new thing that I have learnt. Have an incredible day. -Angel
DeleteHello Angel.I would love to see this video.Can you tell me where to find it?.You always put some much effort into your work.I see you have some more blogs completed which I will look at soon.
ReplyDeleteHello Mrs Cassidy Lovely hearing from you again. Here is the link to the video but it is on you tube- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gzfX5dmIYPI That is the link. You can crtl c and crtl v if u want to just search it on google if u want to. Ill catch up with you later have an amazing day. -Angel
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