Opening sentence for my story: The present

Hello Bloggers, We all have been learning to write an interesting first sentence to hook our reader. my first sentecne was "One day there was a boy that was at home playing on the TV with his controller. He was in his living room." And then I improved myself and wrote "BAM BAM BAM BAM BAM There were flashing lights coming from the TV. There was a boy playing on that TV. It was very Dull. He was in the living room." I think my updated sentence was much more exiting. Does my opening sentence hook my attention?