I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Bloggers, Today I am going to be showing you my narrative writing of the elephant who danced. Please leave a comment down below and I will try to reply back, have an amazing day.
Hello Angel K. Overall I think your blog was very good, a few small spelling mistakes could have been corrected if you read your finished work for mistakes. Love from Grandad.
Hello Angel K. Overall I think your blog was very good, a few small spelling mistakes could have been corrected if you read your finished work for mistakes. Love from Grandad.
ReplyDeleteHi Grandad thank you for the advice -Love Angel.
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