Goldilocks- point of view

 Hello Readers, today I am going to be showing you my writing that I have done. I have written about Goldilocks and the three bears. I had to be one of the characters and say I if I was Goldilocks I would have to say for her "I like this porridge." Here is my writing. 

A beautiful morning In a dense forest there lived three bears. Mamma bear, daddy bear, and baby

bear. All of the three bears had porridge in the morning, daddy bear said “ The porridge is too hot ,

what should we do now?”Mamma bear said”  Maybe we can go out for a walk and hopefully

when we

come back it will be cooled down” 

When the three bears left I came walking along in the dense forest to look for some berries

because my mum asked me to grab some. I was looking through the forest and couldn't see

any of the beautiful butterflies and rabbits that are hopping with joy. I went too far away and I

was lost, I said to myself “ I am so tired.” Suddenly I saw a tiny cottage and thought whose it

was. So I went over there peeked through the window and saw no one. “ I wonder if I could

rest here for a few minutes.” “ Hello hello anyone there?” “ There seems to be no one there

.” So I slowly pushed the door open, I was looking around and went inside the cottage. “This

indeed is a very wonderful cottage.” “Mmmm what is that lovely smell? 

I am suddenly feeling very hungry now.” I walked down to the table and saw three bowls 

that had porridge in them. “This is a nice big bowl, I will have the porridge from this one.

” “ This is very hot. “I have burned my tongue.”I tried the second bowl, this is too cold and

it is not tasting quite nice.” “I tried the third bowl Mmmmmm yummy I like this bowl this is

just right,

I hope no one minds.” “ Now I am feeling a bit drowsy.” “I think I will rest here for sometime 

and then go home.” 

Suddenly I found three chairs. “ This chair is too big.” “ This chair is medium but I can’t get on.

“ I think the small chair will be just right.” But then when I sat on the chair the chair broke and

I fell down.” “ Ouch that hurt and the chair has broken.” “ I hope the owner will not get too angry.”

I tried my best to fix the chair but could not. “ I have been a bad girl today, I promised mum I would

get the berries and not have gone too far but I did not get the berries and went too far away.”

“Now I have eaten someone's porridge and broke their chair. “ I feel very naughty and very sorry

for what I did.” “ I will wait here for the owners to come back .” “I do hope that the owners will be

kind and forgive me.” I looked out the window but saw no one there.” “I will only wait here for

a few moments otherwise I will not be able to get home because it will be dark.”

“Mum is going to be

so angry with me.”

I was waiting for a while and then wandered to a room with three beds. “I am so tired and the

beds look so comfy I might just rest here for a few minutes.” “This bed is a bit hard.”

“This bed is too soft.” “This bed is just right”. “This bed is so comfortable I will lie down here for a while.

 Later on the three bears came back from their walk. Daddy bear said “ The porridge

must have cooled down by now.” When the three bears were inside daddy bear said

“Someone has been having my porridge.” “Mumma bear said “ Someone has been having

my porridge too.” Baby bear said “

Someone has eaten all my porridge, what will I eat now?” Mamma bear said “ Now now 

baby bear don't worry. I will make you some more porridge but who has come here?”

Daddy bear said “ Humph! Someone has been sitting on my chair.” Mumma bear said “

I think someone has been sitting on my chair as well.” Baby bear said “ Someone has

broken my chair!” Mumma bear said “ Who could it be let's have a look around the

house to see.” Then the three bears went into the next room which is with the beds.

Daddy bear said  “ Someone has been sleeping on my bed.” Mamma bear said someone

has been sleeping on my bed.” Baby bear said “ Oh look mamma Daddy someone is sleeping

on my bed.” Baby bear said “ I am sure that is the baddie who ate my porridge, and broke my

chair.”  Baby bear also said, “ Come one Mama punish punish!” The loud sounds that the baby

bear was making made me wake up. I got a fright and jumped out of bed,I  ran to the open

window and ran away as fast as I could. Mama bear said  “ oh the poor girl you scared her

away.” Baby bear said “ She broke my chair and ate my porridge. She is horrible.

” Mamma bear said “ Oh come on baby bear.” “You can always get more porridge

and get a new chair but you scared the little girl.”

 I ran home and my mum asked “ Why are you painting like this?” I said “ oh mamma

I saw some bears in the forest I was so scared and just ran home.” My mum said “ Oh my child you

promised me you would not go far away.” I said “ I promise mamma I will never do it ever again.

” My mum said “ Well go wash your hands and get ready for dinner and then you can go to bed.”