Hello Readers, today I am going to be showing you my flower that I have drawn. We have been learning about giving feedback to other people. So we are going to be showing you readers flowers that we have done to get feedback of what we could do next time. What could I do to improve my drawing of this flower?
Hi there Angel, I love how you tried to do your best at drawing it and it looks great. I also like drawing and trying and like to make it alike. I want to ask a question Do you like doing drawing?? I hope you have a good day Bye!
ReplyDeleteWhat I really like about your picture Angel is that I knew what flower you had drawn before I saw the photo.Well done.You have started off well with the petals and I like the way that you have drawn the base of the flower.I think with a bit of shading,it will help your art piece stand out and look more natural.Good luck with the flower show.
ReplyDeleteHello Angel K, Your drawing is a very close likeness to the coloured picture in the photo. We are no experts on drawing, so cannot advise you on how you could have done a better drawing, so well done on a good job.
ReplyDeleteLove from Grandma and Grandad.