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Monday, August 2, 2021

Narrative Writing

 Hello Readers, 

Today I am going to be showing you my narrative writing that I had to break up into parts. The story that I did was Red Riding Hood. 

please don't forget to comment! Hope you enjoy.


Title: 

Little red riding hood



Main Characters

Grandmother

Little red riding hood

Little red riding hood's mum

Big bad wolf




Orientation/Beginning

Little red riding hood’s mum tells little red riding hood to give her grandmother a basket of apples.








Build-Up/Events

Then little red riding hood gets to her grandmother's house and knocks on her door and she hears a voice say come in, and then she went in and said “Grandmother what big ears you have”, “To hear you better dear.” Then little red riding hood says “What big eyes you have.”  “The better to see you dear.” 







Complication/

Problem/Dilemma

Then little red riding hood says “What big teeth you have.” “The better to eat you with, my dear.” roared the wolf and he leapt out of the bed and began to chase little red riding hood. Almost too late, Little Red riding Hood realized that the person in the bed was not her grandmother, but a hungry wolf. She  ran across the room and through the door, shouting, "Help!  Wolf!" as loudly as she could.A woodsman who was chopping logs nearby heard her cry and ran towards the cottage as fast as he could.









Resolution

He grabbed the wolf and made him spit out the poor Grandmother, but still in one piece."Oh Grandma, I was so scared!"  cried Little Red Riding Hood, "I'll never speak to strangers or dawdle in the forest again."











Ending


"There, there, child. Thank goodness you shouted loud enough for this kind woodsman to hear you!"

The woodsman knocked out the wolf and carried him deep into the forest where he wouldn't bother people any longer.

Little Red Riding Hood and her Grandmother had a nice lunch and a long chat.











2 comments:

  1. I like your ending Angel.I was just wonder if the Woodman should be included in with the main characters.
    I would love to know your opinion as to why he should be or shouldn't be...

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    1. Kia Orana Mrs Cassidy. Thanks for the advice! I forget to do that. - Thank you from Angel.

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