Hello welcome back to my blog. Here is some writing I did. We had to do free writing to go to morning tea. The teacher said "If you have enough writing and I check if it is enough writing then you can go to morning tea when the bell rings". I had enough writing so she let me go. Before I got sent to morning tea I wrote about a Turtle. I am happy that I got to go to morning tea. Here is my writing hope you like and enjoy reading my writing. Thank you for looking at my writing and blog.
Once upon a time there was a Turtle.
I picked it up and I brought a glass with water in it for the Turtle.
I put the turtle in the glass with water. I called the Turtle Otra.
Otra was a girl turtle. When I put her in the glass with water she liked it.
I gave her food and the food was just salt. She ate it. I gave her more salt.
She ate that as well. I think she liked the salt. She started to play around. I just watched Otra. When I was watching her I fell asleep.
Suddenly I woke up and Otra was bigger. After I went to the shop with otra. I
brought another glass box with water in it.
But that time I went to the shop I brought the biggest glass box with water in it.
Then I went home and slept again. Orta was bigger.
There were no more big glass water boxes. So I went to the beach.
Then I took a picture of Otra before she left. I put Otra back in the ocean from the beach.
I was sad because I had to put her back.
But then when I was at my house I put the picture of Otra on a wall in my room.
I picked it up and I brought a glass with water in it for the Turtle.
I put the turtle in the glass with water. I called the Turtle Otra.
Otra was a girl turtle. When I put her in the glass with water she liked it.
I gave her food and the food was just salt. She ate it. I gave her more salt.
She ate that as well. I think she liked the salt. She started to play around. I just watched Otra. When I was watching her I fell asleep.
Suddenly I woke up and Otra was bigger. After I went to the shop with otra. I
brought another glass box with water in it.
But that time I went to the shop I brought the biggest glass box with water in it.
Then I went home and slept again. Orta was bigger.
There were no more big glass water boxes. So I went to the beach.
Then I took a picture of Otra before she left. I put Otra back in the ocean from the beach.
I was sad because I had to put her back.
But then when I was at my house I put the picture of Otra on a wall in my room.
Good morning Angel.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely story.I think if I found a turtle I would just fill up the bath tub and put it in there.I like how your story is set out well and it's easy to read.
You've got good punctuation and capital letters for names.Well done.
I was pleased to read that you got to go for morning tea.
It's a wet day today so there won't be much happening outside.
What do you do at home to keep yourself busy?. Yesterday I finished putting together a 1000 piece puzzle.
Thank you for commenting. I like that Idea that you put about putting the turtle in the bath and filling the bath with water. And wow for the puzzle. Did it take you long? I think it did. I keep myself buzy by putting stuff on my blog and doing homework. I have been doing some maths for school today with my grandad. He helped me out. But it is only when he is not busy. I have been baking piklots with my grandma. And my aunty made me Jelly for my birthday. I had an amazing birthday as well. And I made penacota with my grandma. Have a betufil day and a warm day as well-Angel
DeleteI do not know how to spell Betufil correctly.
DeleteYou have certainly had a busy few days.The puzzle took me 2 days to do.I have read a few blogs over the past couple of days and I have noticed you have commented on many.I must say,you are very good at leaving a message.You don't just leave a short sentence,you leave a well worth comment.Happy belated birthday.I remember your aunty from when she went to HPS.Keep up the great blogging.What great grand parents you have.What flavoured jelly did you have?.I like strawberry/raspberry.Keep warm.
ReplyDeleteWow the puzzle would take me like maybe 2 weeks. Do you love puzzles? I had strawberry Jelly. your are good at remembering stuff like my sister but I am not good at remembering . Only sometimes I am good at remembering. Once my grandma asked me what I had for dinner last night. And I forgot. I will try too keep warm. I am warm right now. We have a heat pump going now and it is warm. I have a new sheet for my bed and it is so warm. I used to have a cold sheet before when I hopped into bed. But now when I go into bed it is cozy and warm. I love my bed. See you when I see you. You comment a lot on my blog and it is great. You are really good at commenting on blogs. So thank you for spending some time on commenting on my blog.-Angel.
DeleteGood afternoon Angel.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy doing jigsaw puzzles but not all the time.Today I will be going for a walk with Sam and Salt since the sun is out.What will you be doing while he sun is out?.
I have been outside. And I have been playing on my scooter. And I had a walk with my grandad. I have been looking at my caterpillar. I have been playing on my swings at home. And I was playing with my imaginary friend. I just made a friend up. The friend is not real. The imaginary friend is a girl and her name is Chantelle. I have been talking to her on the swings.
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